Saturday, October 11, 2014

[Book Review] When Girlfriends Make Choices by Savannah Page

When Girlfriends Make ChoicesWhen Girlfriends Make Choices by Savannah Page

My rating: 1 of 5 stars

eISBN: 978-1481985482
Price: $0.99
394 pages, eBook Edition
Genre: Chick-Lit, Women's Fiction


A novel about forbidden love, the choices you make, and discovering what’s important in life.

Lara Kearns has it all. She has her MBA, a successful career in advertising in Seattle, and she’s even living with her best friend and single mom, Robin. Reliable, dedicated, and eager, Lara is the resident go-to-girl, and she wouldn’t have it any other way.

Lara's that girl who has everything going for her…everything, that is, except for true love. With the big 3-0 on its way and no man in sight, Lara wonders if she’ll always be married to her career, or her cat, and never find the One.

But then, when she least expects it, a handsome and suave executive at her firm, Paul Mackenzie, makes a pass at her. Hesitant at first about striking up an office romance, Lara eventually finds herself falling for her charming colleague. And the best part? Paul is falling in love with Lara, too!

What happens, though, when the man of your dreams loves you…and his wife?

Battling with what the head and the heart want, Lara finds herself in a precarious situation. Life is spiraling out of control, but with the support of her therapist and friends, Lara must make a choice. Is she really prepared to chase after love…at all costs?

This is a provocative story about struggling between right and wrong. About what you will or won’t do for true love. About what happens when girlfriends make choices.

The most memorable quote from this book is this narrative from Lara: "You can't have Mr. Right (or who you presume to be Mr. Right) at the expense of everything. Not when that love hurts so many people around you. Just because you want something with all your heart doesn't mean you are entitled to it. Not when the relationship causes so much hurt, so much angst... No relationship should do that. No real and true love should be rife with anger and jealousy, fear and pain, shame and obsession. I'll love again. But the right love. Not the forbidden kind." I like this quote because finally, it shows character development that readers should've seen in the middle of the book not almost towards the end.

This is the first book that exposed me to Savannah Page. While I love supporting indie authors (because there are now more indie titles published that is professionally done, has enjoyable characters and amazing storylines), and I do enjoy reading Chick-Lit and Women's Fiction, sadly this book fell below my expectations because there are nine words that should've been spelled as "lounge" as in chaise lounge but was instead spelled as "longue" (maybe spell-checker failed or auto-correct kicked in? I don't know) and coming across it so many times made my straight hair curl with annoyance. On top of that, I have counted fourteen errors (grammatical and typos combined) sprinkled throughout the book which is a little too many for me and that doesn't even include the "longue" typos. I will not put them all down here in this review but if the author wants to know about these errors, she can definitely send me an email and I will be more than happy to provide them to her so she can update her book because we all know that books, even those that have gone through editing and proof reading, can still have a few errors in it that proof readers, editors, beta readers did not catch. This book has a promising storyline, real enough secondary characters, narrative and dialogue are okay. My problem with this book is with Lara. Her never-ending stupidity and obsession over Paul, a coworker she had an affair with and a married man at that, makes me angry and she makes me want to throw the book across the room. On top of that, you only get to assume Lara got her own happy ending with a nice, single guy! I actually want to know how her blind dates went and who Lara ends up with. So yes, I did not appreciate how this book ended because at 394 pages, the author could have cut off all the other secondary character's drama (or shortened it), definitely shortened the lengthy scenes depicting Lara's struggle to deal with her obsession and stalker tendencies (this part could be a very well written narrative instead) and probably at page 250-ish, the author could've shown Lara's character development (see this review's part about my most memorable quote) and spend the next 144 pages showing Lara actively going on blind dates and getting to know herself and the guys she has dinner with, ending with Lara finally falling truly and madly in love with one of them. With eight books in this series When Girlfriends, I am not sure I want to read the other books in the series mainly because I already got a gist of what happened to all the other girlfriends. Writing a series can be tricky but the author should've just focused on Lara and her story since this book is all about Lara. She could place a couple of hints for the other girlfriends and use foreshadowing so that readers would want to read the other books in this series. Overall, this book could benefit from additional editing and revisions.



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